Wow so you do a bit of a workout then go to the gym, that's dedication. I would probably go cbf after doing those big three exercises. I might have to look somewhere else then, the 24/7 thing really appeals to me though.
Criticism for my upper body workout? I do this twice a week and my goal is mass at the moment. I would like to add pull-ups but again I workout at home and don't have access to anything to support my weight...
Upper body:
Dead lift 3x6, 1x8 at 50% weight
Reverse Grip bent over barbell rows 3x6
Seated shoulder presses 3x6
Side Lateral Raises 3x8
Bench Press/Dumbbell press 3x6-8
Incline Dumbbell press (sometimes) 3x6-8